Write about a time when you were angry. Focus on the cause of your anger. In other words, what made you angry? This should be a minimum of one full paragraph with an easily understood topic sentence. For example, “I was angry when …” The key to doing well on this type of writing is to provide explanations.
YOUR STUPIDITY ENRAGES ME. I hate when you treat me like im five, like i have no atettion span. When you say something I listen, you dont have to repeat it 5 times. I know how to use a knife to cut a piece of chicken or a carrott.I dont need to you treat me like im five. I dont want you to completely cut me off but i wish you would treat me like a growing adult. and i wish you would realize that everything you point out that i do wrong, you do the same things. I just dont think you realize it,if i mention anything you start to freak out and yell. I want to scream and shout and punch everything in sight, but i cant i contain myself because i cant let my anger get the best of me!!!!!
2 comments:
Lauren, i can see that you put a lot of thought into this, does this have to do with your parents? friends? a bit confused on that but i can relate, I've been treated like I'm five, sometimes by teachers. i think though the first sentence "your stupidity enrages me" is a little much, sort of out of the blue, otherwise i like this whole blog, good job.
First thing i have to say is wow!!! this is an amazing piece of writing. I really like the detail that you put in in and it made me feel like i was really there!!! It is really interesting cause it seems like you really spoke from the heart and i really enjoy reading pieces of writing like that. Is this something about your family. Acationally I can relate. Good job on this blog!!!
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