DUE TUE 4/17- Helpful Blog Comments

Kit Haggard said...
Lauren,

I REALLY like this peice. I chose this one to comment on for two reasons. One, I think that acting justly is HELP the community, not hurt it. If eveyone acted justly and honsetly, there would be far fewer problems in this world today.

Second, I agree with what you said about happiness. I think that it IS diffrent for every peson.

My recomendaition would be to reread things before you post them, thi one for example, was a little inchoherent.

I know that you were feeling baad today, so I hope that you are feeling better!!

Kit

Kits comment really helped me because she told me her opinion on how she felt about my blog i had written and also, told me what she agreed with and what her opinions were on the particular subject.




JulianGrijalva said...

Lauren, i can see that you put a lot of thought into this, does this have to do with your parents? friends? a bit confused on that but i can relate, I've been treated like I'm five, sometimes by teachers. i think though the first sentence "your stupidity enrages me" is a little much, sort of out of the blue, otherwise i like this whole blog, good job.

Julian just as Kit's helped me because he gave me contstructive critism. He told me what he liiked and what worked, and what he thought wasnt very good.





Paige! said...
Im glad that youre not confused with anything. greatt job.


paiges was encouraging but did help me at all at improving what i had done.